Wednesday 2 March 2016

Magazine draft

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13 comments:

  1. Unknown8 February 2016 at 03:00

    WWW- I like the fonts that you have used on the front cover. I also like the blue colour that is used as it stands out.
    EBI- The blue could follow through all three pages. There could also be more writing on the contents page and double page spread.

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  2. Harry Pattison8 February 2016 at 04:15

    Cover
    www- good use of contrasts in colours and image
    ebi- use different fonts, pricing and date should be shown clearly aswell

    Contents-
    www- good image positioning
    ebi- way more text needed and layout could change also fonts

    DPS-
    www- good left page
    ebi- right page lacks text and relevance, also layout could change to look less like a power point and more a magazine article

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  3. Unknown8 February 2016 at 05:27

    Cover:
    WWW:Good image layout, I like how it overlaps the masthead.
    EBI: A bit content added such as the date and the price.

    Contents:
    WWW: I like the placement of the image.
    EBI: More information needed, it makes it look quite plain.

    DPS:
    WWW: Interesting and different topic.
    EBI: More content is needed as there isn't a sufficient amount in my opinion.

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  4. rob8 February 2016 at 05:31

    Cover-
    WWW- Very colourful and it would stand out well, I like the colour scheme used.
    EBI-
    Contents-
    WWW- Very good and clear layout
    EBI- Very bland in co-ordination to the front cover
    Double page spread-
    WWW- Good photos used
    EBI- Maybe get a shot of your model/artist on a MacBook or using computer software to comply with the article

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  5. Angel Dewing-Hall8 February 2016 at 06:21

    Cover:
    WWW- Bold and a good photo.
    EBI- I wouldn't use such a bold colour for the background and a bright feature colour, in my opinion.

    Contents:
    WWW- Good photo and clear text.
    EBI- include more page numbers to fill the space on the page.

    Double page:
    WWW- Clear article, well laid out.

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  6. James9 February 2016 at 02:45

    Cover
    WWW - I like the bright use of the colors
    EBI - I would chose colors that complemented each other more

    Contents
    WWW - I like the model on the edge of the magazine
    EBI - Include more page numbers

    DP Spread
    WWW - CASA band name
    EBI - The relevance of the article is to be questioned

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  7. makeupandme9 February 2016 at 03:28

    Cover
    WWW:good use of colour- makes it look different
    EBI: add some more text and pick colour that are better suited together

    Contents
    WWW: good image
    EBI: more writing and pages for it isn't very long and keep the same colour scheme

    DPS
    WWW: nice font for the headings
    EBI: you need to feature an article talking about your cover band that is longer than this- follow the same colour scheme as before too

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  8. Jacob Godsell 9 February 2016 at 04:11

    Cover-
    WWW- bold, bright and the masthead is clearly visible. The photograph also works well with the colours.
    EBI-Try a different section of colours

    Content-
    WWW- Good image
    EBI-Seems very minimalist and too simple

    Double page spread-
    WWW-Good image positioning
    EBI-Two individual pages compared to a double page spread

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  9. Unknown9 February 2016 at 04:15

    Front cover
    WWW- Very vibrant and the colour palette looks good
    EBI- Add some more text to describe what's inside

    Contents
    WWW- Image looks good
    EBI- It's quite simple and not much there and keep with the colour scheme

    DPS
    WWW- Positioning of the image is good and good font used for the heading
    EBI- Make it more of a dps rather than two separete pages

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  10. Leah Milner10 February 2016 at 04:01

    Cover-
    WWW-Good choice of fonts and image
    EBI-Add price the price of the magazine and try a lighter colour for the background

    Contents-
    WWW-Clear layout and good positioning of the image
    EBI-Incorporate some of the colour used on the cover

    DPS-
    WWW-Font and underlining of the heading works well
    EBI-More text and maybe display it in a column format

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  11. Unknown11 February 2016 at 01:00

    WWW- I like the colour scheme and the way the front cover stands out with the bright blue background.
    EBI- Add a price to the front cover
    WWW- The font looks good.
    EBI- A lot of empty space and the article titles are a bit vague.
    WWW- The font looks good and the way the title is underlined looks unique.
    EBI- It isn't really a DPS because both pages are different and one is irrelevant to the other.

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  12. Tom Crane AS Media21 February 2016 at 08:01

    Cover-
    WWW- Your front cover is very bright and appealing which is good as more people are dawn towards the cover. The Photoshop skills that you have used on the images are very good.
    EBI-Try a different section of colours just to see what it would look like with a different colour scheme.
    Content-
    WWW- Very Good image and the Photoshop skills are very good.
    EBI-Too big of a gap in the bottom left.
    Double page spread-
    WWW- Very well taken images.
    EBI-Two individual pages compared to a double page spread

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  13. engmisskp1 April 2016 at 09:35

    Ryan: get your final draft published to your blog asap.
    Also, get those evaluation tasks done and posted on here so I can mark them and help you with them.

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